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Rosella and Edgar
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I also think there should be more scenes. They barely knew each other. My suggestion would be try to make it more harder for Rosella to turn down the proposal at the end with more scenes.

Like after Lolotte throws her in the dungeon could extend that so Edgar and Rosella could talk. Like he stands outside her cell door and they could talk for a bit.

Or they could talk when he gives her the key to free herself.
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Rosella and Edgar - by Ellivia22 - 10-03-2013, 12:54 AM
RE: Rosella and Edgar - by Admin - 10-03-2013, 10:00 AM
RE: Rosella and Edgar - by Ellivia22 - 10-03-2013, 05:33 PM
RE: Rosella and Edgar - by Mike0908 - 29-04-2013, 01:01 AM
RE: Rosella and Edgar - by Rosella - 29-04-2013, 11:42 AM